My evaluation for my music magazine coursework Evaluation:
My media product is a hip hop and R&B music magazine aimed at young black teenagers of both sexes. Before I began our music magazines I looked at examples of other magazines that had the same genre, and analysed them in depth so that when we came to do ours we had a better understanding. Not only that, but so we could follow the rules which make music magazines recognisable to audiences.
My media product is a hip hop and R&B music magazine aimed at young black teenagers of both sexes. Before I began our music magazines I looked at examples of other magazines that had the same genre, and analysed them in depth so that when we came to do ours we had a better understanding. Not only that, but so we could follow the rules which make music magazines recognisable to audiences.
There are many ways in which my magazine uses the forms and conventions of a real music magazine.
One of the conventions I included was a selling line at the top of the magazine which states “The UK’s biggest hip hop ‘n’ R&B magazine you will ever read’. I’ve done this because selling lines are used a lot on magazine front covers to promote the magazine and so the audience would be more interested in spending their money because it’s the ‘UK’s best’
I also put ‘n’ instead of and in the selling line because my target audience (teenagers) would understand that type of slang and would appeal to them more.
Not only that I used a bright and large masthead which is another convention. It’s placed in front of the model even though it would look more professional to place it behind, but I decided to make slight changes deliberately and challenge this convention so I placed it there because I wanted it to be one of the main highlights of the page. I also chose the font from the website ‘Dafont.com’ making sure the font matched the type of genre I chose for my magazine and at the same time making it look intriguing to my target audience.
Furthermore, I tried to make it stand out by making it bright blue to draw the attention of young teenagers as they’re into bright aluminous colours.
More conventions that I used to make my music magazine recognisable to audiences, was include a barcode and including the price and date line.
These things are important because the audience need to know the price of the magazine before they decide to buy it and so they can decide whether or not this magazine is worth spending their money on. In addition they need to be informed of when the magazine was published because they want to make sure that their not reading old news because that wouldn’t be any use to them because they have other free sources they can go to for that. So I placed it underneath the masthead so it’s clear and easily recognisable for the target audience.
Also the barcode is important because almost every product has one unless the product is free. This shows I’ve used the forms and conventions because without a barcode you can’t buy the magazine and every real music magazine has one. Some real music magazines have the website included on the barcode; the audience would be a bit confused buying a magazine or product without a barcode on it.
Other conventions used to attract my target audience were the cover lines on my magazine. Cover lines on magazines are very important and are recognised by audiences because it gives you a mini snapshot of what’s going to be included in the magazine; audiences can look at it and make the decision of whether or not this magazine is for them, in terms of age group or the taste in the music the magazine promotes and so on.
The cover lines in my music magazine are in the same font which is sans serif font. I done this because I wanted to make it look professional to show the audience that even though it’s a teenage magazine it doesn’t mean that it’s less professional or has less quality as other magazines aimed at older audiences.

Another convention I’ve used which is found on most music magazine covers is the picture of the model being in medium close up with an eye level shot. I’ve imitated that in my music magazine also to make my magazine look more realistic and because the image is the main selling point of the magazine so it had to be dominant over everything else on the cover.

Not only that but I included a ‘contents’ title so the audience knows that this page is the contents and I included the name of the magazine also as part of the title, by placing this underneath and making it white to stand out. I developed this convention because most magazines put the name of their magazine somewhere in the corner or make it small or don’t use it on their contents page at all, but I made it large to show the importance of it. Also making both the titles stand out by making them large and using strokes and so on. But including fusions website and cover date in the top right hand side of the page as well. This is a convention that would be recognisable to my target audience. I made it white on a black background so that it stands out even though it’s small, and so it’s easy to find if the audience need some sort of contact information to the magazine. This is important.
Other conventions I’ve followed/used are the headlines which were ‘Inside’ and ‘Monthly’ so that the audience is clear of what’s inside the magazine as well as what’s in it magazine monthly. I made the text white again on a black background because it’s bright and clear for the audience to read. Also I separated the magazine into different areas (following more of the conventions). In addition I wrote a little bit about the pages underneath by using slogans to give the audience more insight on the pages available in the magazine and making it more interesting. Also putting them into columns making it clear and easy to follow but also is a recognisable convention to audiences.
Page numbers are also included, which is another convention.
Also I used black models which show that this magazine is aimed at black teenagers of both genders. Even though there’s only one picture of a male on the contents page I challenged this convention because if a music magazine is aimed at both sexes there would be roughly the same amount of pictures of both sexes whereas mine was done because the pictures of the girls attracts the boys, Also because they’d want to look at a magazine full of girls rather than a magazine full of guys. (Unless they were homosexuals). Also girls prefer to look at girls or older women in magazines that they can aspire to, be more like and look up too.
I developed the convention of having the pictures go around the writing because on most magazine contents pages all the pictures are either on one side or are together then the writing on the other side in a column. But I made mine slightly different making it more unique, and because there isn’t much text there are more pictures to attract my target audience.
The colour schemes used on the contents page is another convention because there the same colours used on the front cover; showing consistency.
The editor’s note’s is a bright and white to make it bold and stand out with the name of the editor, signature and photograph. This is important as it makes the reader feel as if the editor is talking to them; it’s in a non formal style of writing but involving the reader.

Last but not least there are more things I’ve used on my double page spread which follow the conventions of a real magazine. Such as the title ‘Rhianna’s come back’ which indicates the subject of what the text is going to be about, I made it large and white with a stroke to make it stand out.

A stand first was also included as a convention as a mini introduction about the text making the audience interested and excited about what’s coming next and making sure its not too long at the same time.
Other conventions I followed was having the large image of the model on the right hand side of the page but taking up the whole page because the picture is large it creates an illusion that the reader’s close to the model.
The image usually spills over two pages on real music magazine double page spreads; even though the image spills over two pages I had the model large on one side taking up one page and the background of the photo on the other side so that I could put the text in. I put the image on the one side taking up the page so that it stands out more than the text to appeal to my target audience. I also had 3 other pictures of the same model on the bottom of the page so that it’s more interesting and more appealing to the target audience because if there was one main picture it would be a bit plain and boring so I developed this convention and put 3 little images of the same model; also including strokes around the pictures so that it makes the pictures more vibrant and captivating to look at.
I challenged a convention because usually on a double page spread of a real magazine the quote’s are in-between he text but I separated it putting it over by the picture, to make it seem that the model is actually speaking to them saying ‘Never thought I’d make it’ by putting the quote near her face making it more real for the reader as It’s exactly her words.
Forms and conventions I’ve also followed on my double page spread putting the text into columns making sure it doesn’t spill over on the other side where the picture is because I want the reader to be more drawn to the picture rather than the text.
I used small font size12 because the text on double page spreads in real magazines are small but clear so you can fit more information on the page. I also used drop capital as a convention of a real magazine indicating to the reader where the article actually starts and where to start reading.





































